The winter comes. Everything is all white. I wear a thick（厚的） coat and go out. Ah! What’s over there? It’s a big bear! It comes to me and says, “Can you tell me a story?”
433000 湖北省仙桃市实验小学五（5）班 肖雨轩
（琪琪：哇，看完这段话，我想起了《纳尼亚传奇》中的情节。我很想知道肖雨轩同学给这只熊讲了一个什么故事！）
Today my little sister comes to visit me. She wears a white coat. We enjoy playing games. She likes to listen to stories. So I tell her a story about bears.
363000 福建省漳州市龙师附小五（2）班 苏钰涵
（琪琪：作者真是个好姐姐，不仅跟妹妹玩游戏，还给妹妹讲了个关于熊的故事。不过这段话还是欠缺了一点想象力哦。）
I have a toy bear. It’s lovely. It has two big eyes and a gray nose. It wears a red coat. There is a white bag on its back. It sits on my bed every day. Every evening, I tell it a story before I go to bed.
226463 江苏省如东县河口镇河口小学301班 吴艳红 指导老师 马巧英
（琪琪：这只玩具熊可真幸福啊，每天晚上作者都在睡觉前给它讲故事！如果有人每天给我讲个故事就好了。星彩：我给你讲。从前……此处略去328个字。完了！ ）
A polar bear（北极熊） writer
Wears a white coat,
Writing an interesting story
About his white world.
226100 江苏省海门市通源小学六（2）班 顾章闻 指导老师 吴芳芳
（琪琪：哈哈，北极熊摇身一变，成了一个作家，还给我们书写他冰雪世界里的有趣故事。作者的想象力不错哦！）